Direct Response Copywriter — DTC & Ecommerce

I write the words that make your clients stop scrolling and buy.

Cold outreach, lead-gen emails, and landing page copy that reads like a person talking, not a template — bilingual, French & English.

4 yrs
Copywriting experience
2 yrs
Direct response focus
44+
Projects shipped
10+
Industries served
Selected Work

Copy built to convert, not just read well.

Filter by format — this is where each piece actually lives in the funnel.

Lead Magnet · Generic Campaign

MUA — MUA Q Leadmagnet

Five distinct angles tested on the same cold list: pressure, promise, simplicity, story, and a direct-reply CTA.

Cold Outreach · Full Sequence

MUA — DMC Cold Outreach (Full Sequence)

Case-study-led opener plus six follow-ups, ending in a straightforward paid offer and a permission-based break-up email.

Not For Everyone adAd

YouthRite — Not For Everyone

Qualifying-angle ad that filters out impatient buyers before making the case.

Fibroblast Collapse video adVideo Ad

YouthRite — Fibroblast Collapse

UGC video on cellular dormancy — why collagen cells shut down, not die, when estrogen drops.

Dormancy UGC video adVideo Ad

YouthRite — Dormancy UGC

First-person "my specialist told me" framing relaying the same dormancy mechanism through borrowed authority.

Ranking Treatment video adVideo Ad

YouthRite — Ranking Treatment

Authority-ranking format walking through menopausal skin treatments before positioning YouthRite.

Penetration Failure — Texture video adVideo Ad

YouthRite — Penetration Failure: Texture

Vertical UGC-style video ad, tactile/texture angle, cut with body copy for the Facebook post.

Two Tricks adAd

YouthRite — Two Tricks

Exposé-angle ad calling out two common skincare-marketing tricks before positioning the fix.

Menopausal Skin adAd

YouthRite — Menopausal Skin

Educational-angle ad explaining why standard skincare misses menopausal skin at the cellular level.

Failed Solution Callback adAd

YouthRite — Failed Solution Callback

First-person testimonial ad naming why past treatments failed before introducing the fix.

Happens adAd

YouthRite — Happens

Long-form narrative ad reframing "normal aging" as a specific, addressable cellular signal loss.

YouthRite Menopause Sales PageLanding Page

YouthRite — Menopause Sales Page

Full-length product sales page for menopausal women, covering founder story, product education, and social proof.

YouthRite Deep Sleep Amplifier upsell pageUpsell Page

YouthRite — Deep Sleep Amplifier (Upsell)

Post-purchase upsell reframing deep sleep as the missing ingredient for peptide results.

YouthRite Daytime Shield upsell pageUpsell Page

YouthRite — Daytime Shield (Upsell)

Upsell built around a gap most customers don't know they have: daytime UV collagen breakdown.

YouthRite Detox Reset upsell pageUpsell Page

YouthRite — Detox Reset (Upsell)

Upsell addressing why visible results stall even when the core product is working.

YouthRite Clearance Mask upsell pageUpsell Page

YouthRite — Clearance Mask (Upsell)

Upsell offering a faster timeline to visible results by clearing a bottleneck step.

Tooth Extraction in Sarasota, FL landing pageLanding Page

SRQ Smiles — Tooth Extraction in Sarasota, FL

Service page addressing extraction fears and driving consult bookings.

Implant Dentists in Sarasota, FL landing pageLanding Page

SRQ Smiles — Implant Dentists in Sarasota, FL

Service page built around same-day implants and a free consultation offer.

Teeth Cleaning in Sarasota, FL landing pageLanding Page

SRQ Smiles — Teeth Cleaning in Sarasota, FL

Service page written to build trust around a routine, lower-intent procedure.

Dental Crowns in Sarasota, FL landing pageLanding Page

SRQ Smiles — Dental Crowns in Sarasota, FL

Service page built to convert local search traffic into booked crown consultations.

Guide to Digitizing your Employee OnboardingLanding Page

Didacte — Guide to Digitizing your Employee Onboarding

Gated tool download aimed at HR teams standardizing their onboarding process.

LMS Buyer's Guide for Choosing the Best Learning Management SystemLanding Page

Didacte — LMS Buyer's Guide

Gated buyer's guide aimed at SMEs comparing learning management systems.

Campaign · Report Download

Adobe — The State of Marketing Automation

Written to drive downloads of a 600-company benchmark report among marketing leaders.

Campaign · Report Download

Microsoft Dynamics 365 — 9 Emerging Trends for the Futurist CFO

Written to reposition CFOs from number-cruncher to strategic leader, driving report downloads.

Campaign · Ebook Download

Microsoft Dynamics 365 — Accelerating Revenue with AI-Powered Solutions

CRO's guide download email pitching a unified sales and marketing data approach.

Campaign · Lead Gen

Adobe — Make It Personal

Gated research report email built to drive downloads from a 6,000-consumer study.

Case Study

Anatomy of a Winner: The Disqualification Open

YouthRite / The Longevity Journal — Batch #12, "Not For Everyone." A long-copy static targeting a Problem Aware menopausal audience, cold. The hook: "This isn't for everyone, and I'd rather tell you that upfront."

The framework

This ad runs on a structure I call push-away-then-mirror: open by disqualifying the reader, then describe exactly who it IS for in enough detail that she recognizes herself. It's part of a broader takeaway/disqualification toolkit I built for filtering unqualified buyers and increasing commitment from the ones who stay.

Margin note "This isn't for you" does the self-selection work the reader would otherwise resist doing herself. She reads the disqualification and immediately decides it doesn't apply to her.

Why it won

The burned, skeptical profile — women who've already tried and been failed by multiple products — turned out to be the highest-intent segment in this avatar pool. Being told upfront "this isn't for everyone" reads as honesty to a reader who's tired of being oversold, which is exactly what lets her keep reading.

Winnervs. account win criteria
Stage 3New mechanism, cold traffic
Margin note Next test: same disqualification open, different mechanism body (UMP 2 vs. UMP 3) — the hook is validated, now isolating which mechanism closes her.
Client Word

Oh yes, they're talking.

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Oumar is a great team player who is fast, efficient and professional. He appreciated feedback and never shied away when something wasn't clear. He has amazing writing skills, both in French and English — I would definitely recommend him.

Marie-Hélène Coustte
Head of Sales & Marketing, Didacte
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A super skilled content/copywriter who communicates clearly and is committed to deadlines. We are looking forward to working with him again.

Gabriel Blanco
Website & Marketing Coordinator, Oberot BV
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Completely reliable, and the quality was outstanding — always helpful and supportive. 100% recommended.

Lina Segovia
Operations Project Coordinator, Summa Linguae Technologies
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A pleasure to work with. We loved his creativity and quick understanding of the scope and our overall brand. We will definitely work with him again.

Julius Geis
Founder, MUA
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I highly recommend working with this copywriter. He's willing to make revisions until it is just right.

Frank Young
Co-Founder, Designed Dental
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It is a pleasure working with Oumar across our numerous B2B projects. His writing is clear, professional, and always audience-appropriate. Thanks for having a sharp editorial eye and consistently deliver polished, well-structured content!

Julia Chernova
Creatives Delivery Team Lead, INFUSE
About

Why me, specifically.

The gap between a sale and a missed opportunity often comes down to a handful of words.

Most product pages, emails, and ads read like they were written for everyone — which means they land with no one. I write copy that speaks to one person's exact hesitation, in the exact moment they're deciding whether to click, read, or buy.

That's the job: not decoration, conversion. Words that turn a browser into a customer, and a customer into someone who comes back.

— Oumar

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